Thursday, May 29, 2008

Too Late...

One silent night...

Jin and his girlfriend, Jane were on the way back home to their hostel....
Jin sensed there was something wrong on Jane that night because of the lonely silence they shared between them that whole night....


Then...

Jane asked to stop by the roadside because she wanted to talk...
Finally, the first word of the night appeared...
She told him that her feelings had changed and that it was time to move on....


Without a word, a tear rolled down his cheek as he slowly reached into his pocket and to take out a paper note which was written by himself before Jane started the talk....

At that moment,

a drunken driver was speeding down on the same street! They both tried to escaped but....

Jane survived but Jin banged right into the drivers seat...
He was killed..
Remembering the note in his hand, Jane pulled it out and read it....


" Without your love, I would die..."


P/S:
First try of writing this kind of short stories....
Hope you enjoy it...
Any comments, welcome...!


1 comment:

Anonymous said...

romance ....